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14 December 2007 @ 09:15 am
[Writing] A Necessary Ritual  
This is from the Cafe Writing prompt for this month.

A character from Lost Highways. He doesn't have a name, I don't think, but he's been stirring for a while. I know the MCs have some interaction with him at some point.

I used the flash fiction option and a free-writing mindset.


~*~

He didn't go out often.

Most of what he needed could be found on the internet and ordered in as much quantity as he required. From clothing to food, toiletries to kitchenware and everything in between.

But there was only one place that sold the tobacco he liked. The kind that tasted sweet and slightly fruity and didn't scorch his lungs with the taste of sour earth like some of the lesser brands did.

For that, he had to walk into town.

Once every two months.

He rolled out of bed on those mornings, just before the sun was due up. He'd found there were fewer people on the sidewalks then. It was much easier to move untouched.

The uniform required was long pants, faded with many washings, and thick-soled boots. Shirts with long sleeves, even in the humidity of the summer when the air coming in off the beach was stifling. Long gloves on his hands, the edges slipping under the sleeves of his shirt; the leather was soft, supple enough he could still feel textures through them but they blocked the flashes of lives from his mind. His neck and face he left uncovered, save for sunglasses when the day was bright. On his head he pushed a well-worn hat low over his eyes.

Every month before he stepped out of his house onto the sandy beach front, he made a side trip to the little room at the back. Small and square, it was filled with a drop leaf table and two chairs, a sagging couch, and a number of brightly colored rugs. On the built in wooden shelves lay an array of knickknacks--items gifted to him after some particularly well received sessions. He never asked for them.

Before his outing, he'd choose one at random. On one day it might be the little glass snow dome of Flagstaff, Arizona, on another the chain of hematite or the expensive letter opener. And he'd pick it up and hold it in his gloved hands with all the care of one holding a poisonous snake. He'd wait for those flashes of other people's lives. Wait for the visions to assault his brain and leave him blinking and holding his head to clear it of other people's histories.

Wait until minutes had passed and he knew that if the flashes were going to come on him they would have done so already. He knew one day they would, knew it like he knew the sun would rise in the morning, that the moon would wane across the night sky. And when that day came, he would pull out the pistol he kept tucked away in the very back of his closet, inside a small lock box buried under a pile of blankets.

Replacing the knickknack, he'd turn from the room, locking the door behind him, and leave through the front entryway of his house, hands stuffed in his pockets, shoulders hunched against the world.
 
 
Doctor, I'm feeling a little: waiting...
 
 
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shiroken: Silence[info]shiroken on December 14th, 2007 06:40 pm (UTC)
I have to tell you, this vignette immediately made me think of Glenn Gould, the marvelously talented and VERY eccentric Canadian pianist who died back in the early '80s. Check out his bio sometime, and tell me if you were having some kind of channeling going on here. *grin*
something rich and strange: black & white[info]sanguineroses on December 16th, 2007 07:24 pm (UTC)
Hm. I don't know about channeling, but since some similarities are already there, I might take the inspiration a bit further. "Glenn Gould if he'd been a clairvoyant..." ^.^
MissMelysse[info]missmelysse on December 14th, 2007 09:38 pm (UTC)
First - this was fascinating. I'd love to see more of him, but he seems a character suited for small interludes.

Second - you're all linked in at CW. Thanks for participating.
something rich and strange: black & white[info]sanguineroses on December 16th, 2007 07:28 pm (UTC)
First - this was fascinating.

Thank you. ^_^

I'd love to see more of him, but he seems a character suited for small interludes.

Yes. I believe he'll have a (moderately) pivotal role on the main characters in the novel (if ever I get past plotting, outlining and snippets of scenes), but I think it will largely be behind the main action.

Though I may turn to some other short fiction about him for exploratory purposes.